The Pop art unit is now complete, and my artwork is completed. It turned ou "kinda cool" (Lodin Ellingsen, 2012), and I feel that the idea itself was well presented. In terms of presentation, my opinion is that it should ideally be placed on a white, square pedastol in a white room, in order to make people focus and think of the actual meaning. Because I feel that the message of my artwork can be understood once one reads the text and thinks about it. If there is too much clutter around it, people won't read it and think about it properly.
Presented in this context, perhaps an explanation text would have been beneficial so people could understand it.
I don't think that there would have been a more simple way to do it, as it has such a complex meaning, and I think that it was wise to not include the mail order box, as I had initially planned, as this becomes too cluttered.
I think the slight abstractness of it makes people think, and I think that people could understand the reference to the post without it being too cluttered. I think it was cool that the text appeared like the mail address.
I think it could have been more easily understood, perhaps by presenting it in a different context or to a different type of audience, but altogether I am quite satisfied with the result :)
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